Friday, September 11, 2009

Reviewer: Christopher Collier

Claudia A. Viegas;Alexander Peter;Christopher Collier: "Enterprise Architecture: Application Development Process ," SU-IEEE, CIS512005016:05,2009
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2 comments:

  1. Prof. PeterSeptember 13, 2009 at 9:18 PM

    1. Were the basic sections (Introduction, Conclusion, Cited, etc.)
    adequate? If not, what is missing?
    A very adequate Intro, Conclusion and use of works cited. Claudia
    created excellent flow for her paper.

    2. Did the writer use subheadings well to clarify the sections of the
    text? Explain.
    Great use of headings to show the flow of user needs through to
    implementation of a software process.

    3. Was the material ordered in a way that was logical, clear, easy to
    follow? Explain.
    Yea, broken into logical paragraphs that the numerical headers displayed.

    4. Rate the paper on Assertion: clarity, importance: (Strong,
    Satisfactory, Weak).
    Claudia used clear definitions of application development and terms
    found within, nice work for those of us who aren't in applications or
    software. Claudia illustratated a major key of successful
    interpretation between technical and non-technical people.

    5. Rate the paper on Evidence: relevance, strength, credibility:
    (Strong, Satisfactory, Weak).
    Again, Strong, driving the point of being able to describe and create
    a facility where both sides of development can contribute.

    6. Rate the paper on Organization: arrangement of ideas, guiding the
    reader: (Strong, Satisfactory, Weak).
    very strong flow and process definition.

    7. Rate the paper on Mechanics: spelling, grammar, punctuation:
    (Strong, Satisfactory, Weak)
    Strong

    8. Overall effectiveness: (Strong, Satisfactory, Weak) and explaing why?
    Claudia worked a great paper. As I stated before, I am not a software
    developer so this paper was enlightening for me. Good Work!

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  2. ClaudiaSeptember 14, 2009 at 5:45 AM

    Thank you Christopher for your kind review :-)

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