Thursday, September 10, 2009

Reviewer: Siraya Sawetrattanaroj

Danee Trapp, Alexander Peter, Siraya Sawetrattanaroj:"Frame Relay," SU-IEEE, CIS532005016:05,2009
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  1. SSirayaSeptember 18, 2009 at 11:07 PM

    1. Were the basic sections (Introduction, Conclusion, Cited, etc.) adequate? If not, what is missing?
    In this paper has good enough introduction explained the topic of frame relay but I don’t see any describe the meaning of packet transmission. Then, in the section of conclusion don’t show the statement of conclusion to explain how this paper is working.
    2. Did the writer use subheadings well to clarify the sections of the text? Explain.
    Yes, the writer did and Explain was very clarifying the section.
    3. Was the material ordered in a way that was logical, clear, easy to follow? Explain.
    The writer was provided and support the material ordered and described the following in the detail of topic. I can understand the key point in frame relay.
    4. Rate the paper on Assertion: clarity, importance: (Strong, Satisfactory, Weak).
    I am very satisfied in this paper although the writer don’t have conclusion and some point have disadvantage but the paper don’t show on the advantage side in the subject. I can understand the topic of Frame Relay in the WAN networking technology.
    5. Rate the paper on Evidence: relevance, strength, credibility: (Strong, Satisfactory, Weak).
    The paper has strong rate in the topic. The writer had provided the good information and explains the meaning of each topic and give some the example of the
    6. Rate the paper on Organization: arrangement of ideas, guiding the reader: (Strong, Satisfactory, Weak).
    The organization of this paper is strong enough in the detail. The writer has illustrated of wan technology that be about the frame relay. The writer was writing in the step of frame relay and give the subject of the topic.
    7. Rate the paper on Mechanics: spelling, grammar, punctuation: (Strong, Satisfactory, Weak)
    The spelling, grammar and punctuation are satisfied.
    8. Overall effectiveness: (Strong, Satisfactory, Weak) and explaing why?
    I have satisfied with this paper so I can understand in the frame relay topic. The writer was explaining the frame relay architecture that makes me understand in the detail but it should have some photo or flow chart. However, the overall in this paper was effective

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