Overall, great job with the paper. Very great facts are stated. The paper was easy to read. It flowed from one point to another. In response to the questions we were suppose to answer:
1. Most of the basic sections were adequate. A narrower abstract statement will make it balanced. Giving 2 more sentences. Other than that Great job!
2.Excellent job with the subheadings they each pertained to the subject and the paragraph that followed it.
3.The material was ordered with clarity. Very easy to follow along.
4. Great job overall with the assertions. Some of the sections possibly could have used an importance statement (for lack of correct words). An example of this: Speed in important when dealing with storage devices because...
5. Even though there were a lot of facts within the paper, the Evendence portion was the only portion I would consider weak. A quote from a source supporting some of the facts will strengthen this area. Great job displaying the images provided.
6.The organization of the paper is strong. It guides the reader from beginning to end, making it easier to read.
7. The spelling, grammar, punctuation, portion of the paper is satisfactory due to some word usages. Ex: One again, for Once again. Other than that, great job!
8. The overall effectiveness of the paper is strong. Lots of facts are stated with the paper. Writer seemed knowledgeable in the subject matter. Everything flowed in order. Great introduction sentences!
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ReplyDeleteOverall, great job with the paper. Very great facts are stated. The paper was easy to read. It flowed from one point to another. In response to the questions we were suppose to answer:
ReplyDelete1. Most of the basic sections were adequate. A narrower abstract statement will make it balanced. Giving 2 more sentences. Other than that Great job!
2.Excellent job with the subheadings they each pertained to the subject and the paragraph that followed it.
3.The material was ordered with clarity. Very easy to follow along.
4. Great job overall with the assertions. Some of the sections possibly could have used an importance statement (for lack of correct words). An example of this: Speed in important when dealing with storage devices because...
5. Even though there were a lot of facts within the paper, the Evendence portion was the only portion I would consider weak. A quote from a source supporting some of the facts will strengthen this area. Great job displaying the images provided.
6.The organization of the paper is strong. It guides the reader from beginning to end, making it easier to read.
7. The spelling, grammar, punctuation, portion of the paper is satisfactory due to some word usages. Ex: One again, for Once again. Other than that, great job!
8. The overall effectiveness of the paper is strong. Lots of facts are stated with the paper. Writer seemed knowledgeable in the subject matter. Everything flowed in order. Great introduction sentences!
TaRhea Haynes