1. The basic sections were adequate. The abstract was great, very informative for the audience.
2. The subheadings were worded appropriately. Everthing pertaining to that particular subheading was listed right under it. Great job.
3. The material was orderd in a logical clear and easy to follow format. Because everything was right under its subheading this made it eaier to read, making it organized.
4. As far as assertion, I rate satisfactory. A little more clarification on what to expect within the paper, can help make it stronger.
5. Great references within the paper. The quotes were relevent to the subject whenever used, making the paper flow eaier.
6. The organization of the paper was strong. This is due to the ability to place the proper responses under its correct subheadings. Quotes were pertaining to the subject, whenever used.
7. Overall, great job on spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
8. Has strong overall effectiveness, facts are stated within the paper to support ideas. Paper flows in a systematic order.
I must say, well written paper overall!
ReplyDelete1. The basic sections were adequate. The abstract was great, very informative for the audience.
2. The subheadings were worded appropriately. Everthing pertaining to that particular subheading was listed right under it. Great job.
3. The material was orderd in a logical clear and easy to follow format. Because everything was right under its subheading this made it eaier to read, making it organized.
4. As far as assertion, I rate satisfactory. A little more clarification on what to expect within the paper, can help make it stronger.
5. Great references within the paper. The quotes were relevent to the subject whenever used, making the paper flow eaier.
6. The organization of the paper was strong. This is due to the ability to place the proper responses under its correct subheadings. Quotes were pertaining to the subject, whenever used.
7. Overall, great job on spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
8. Has strong overall effectiveness, facts are stated within the paper to support ideas. Paper flows in a systematic order.
Great Job Ethan!
-TaRhea Haynes
Thank you. You are very kind.
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